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  In the holidays my family went to the zoo to see the elephant.

When we got to the zoo, we went to the shop to buy some food for lunch.

After getting the food we went to the nocturnal house where we saw birds and reptiles which only come out at night.

Before lunch we went for a ride on the train. It was so cool when we went on the train it was fun. 

During lunch we fed some of the birds in the park. In the afternoon we saw the animals being fed.

When we returned home we were tired but happy because we had so much fun.