Volcano Narrative

                                                                 

Did you know the ring of fire has 452 Volcano? A long time ago there were two Volcanoes right in the middle of the ring of fire. One was a woman volcano,and one was a man volcano, so the volcano up top had to sing a song Because he was lonely. and the song he sang was called  had a Dream, so he sang the song for one year. This week in writing, I have been learning to my readers by using different strategies in my writing. me and my volcano narrative have spent some time working on the narrative and adding new hooking in the sentences.